Saturday, October 27, 2012

BD One Last Chance Logline #34


TITLE: A Question of Faith
GENRE: YA Paranormal

Learning that she's magic incarnate turns fifteen-year-old Crystal's religious beliefs upside down, but she has more to deal with than questions about faith and her soul when her boyfriend is kidnapped by a witch hunter and shamans snatch her aunt.

4 comments:

  1. Strong. You have a good inner and external conflict. It will be interesting how issues of faith tie into this.

    Good luck!

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  2. Very interesting. I'd only suggest to break this into two sentences. It runs a little long as one.

    Good luck!

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  3. This sounds interesting. I agree with Carmen about splitting it into two sentences, and I'd also suggest a different verb than "snatch"; I'm not opposed to it as a word, it just sounds odd used parallel-alliteratively with shaman.

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