Thursday, July 26, 2012

July Anything #5

TITLE: Storm Bird
GENRE: Picture Book First Line

Near the tip of the longest limb…on the tallest tree. . .of the highest mountain in Puerto Rico a happy parrot named Eco sat watching the sky turn black.
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6 comments:

  1. L.M. MillerJuly 26, 2012 at 4:02 PM

    I like it. I like the fact that Eco is watching the sky turn black instead of the sunrise/set, or something similar. I wish we could see the picture.

    Good luck!

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  2. Sarah FloydJuly 26, 2012 at 5:10 PM

    Oooh, I like the juxtaposition of "happy parrot" and the sky turning black. Great start!

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  3. Joseph MillerJuly 26, 2012 at 9:43 PM

    I also like this first line... a lot. It paints a great picture that illustrators can have a lot of fun with. Thanks for sharing ;)

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  4. Carmen E.July 27, 2012 at 1:37 PM

    I really like this! It's a great visual read.

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  5. CarolineFrye.blogspot.comJuly 27, 2012 at 1:54 PM

    Thanks everyone! It's so nice to get great reviews!

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  6. S.A. HusseyAugust 2, 2012 at 8:38 PM

    I like it too...would like to see what happens to Eco next. :-)

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