tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post6537994927043637190..comments2023-04-23T16:33:39.062-04:00Comments on K.T. Crowley: BD One Last Chance Logline #37K.T. Crowleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08211266985396588133noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-46006487285725324592012-10-28T10:09:48.112-04:002012-10-28T10:09:48.112-04:00Like it! High stakes! Really good title too.Like it! High stakes! Really good title too.Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04712049007203810266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-26785347530832353972012-10-27T17:14:30.571-04:002012-10-27T17:14:30.571-04:00I agree with the first commenter. Great job!I agree with the first commenter. Great job!Carmenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01502915116446772081noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-35520547369606189152012-10-27T15:13:36.044-04:002012-10-27T15:13:36.044-04:00I feel that since you mention she's pregnant, ...I feel that since you mention she's pregnant, you should have part of the risk be her pregnancy or the baby.Rebeccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15525362690272102453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-7250414310664570762012-10-27T14:45:52.045-04:002012-10-27T14:45:52.045-04:00I would only suggest to add the MC's name. Oth...I would only suggest to add the MC's name. Other than that, sounds like you got it. Good luck!Blue Mermaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00156361888182945992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-32759872761492121402012-10-27T13:08:23.419-04:002012-10-27T13:08:23.419-04:00Only change is "Or risk losing her mind, her ...Only change is "Or risk losing her mind, her children and her life." Other than that it reads strong.<br /><br />Good luck!Authoress Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14384597436791803105noreply@blogger.com